Organization of a Life
A young man was contemplating a decision.
He decided to follow through on that decision and parked his car.
He went in and purchased tulips.
He got back in his car and went to see his girl friend.
He then asked her to marry him.
How does your organization convey your purpose?
Your response: If these pictures are aligned as above, they would convey the purpose of the young man proposing to his girl friend.
Are there different arguments that you could have made by organizing your 5
photos in different ways?
Your response: Yes, there are many different arguments if the pictures are changed. Here is another scenerio.
A man sends the woman flowers to cheer her up.
The woman is looking at the calendar and realizes she is pregnant.
Time is running out.
Will he ask me to marry him?
The man is so stressed; he starts smoking again after being smoke free for a year. Because not only does he not want to marry her; he is not ready for a child.
Are there other elements you could add to make your argument stronger
—for example, playing music with the slide show or adding text?
Your response: Yes, music could be added to enhance the argument. Adding text would also bring clarity to the meaning. Many people may come up with a different story without the clarity of text.
I seriously love your story. I love how you were able to come up with another story with the same pictures. I was not able to do that. I love how you explained that the man was stressed, so he started to smoke. I love the background information for each picture and how just looking at the picture you can take something different away from it. Great job with this. I think if you had happy music for the first set of pictures it would really add emphasis on how the happy couple gets married. If you added sad music to the second set of pictures it would also help with the story.
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